My 2008 in Book Excerpts
Hi! This month has been terribly hectic! Eleven book edits, with little else being accomplished, other than work and editing (oh, and the gym! I joined a gym and have actually been going, if only to get away from my computer).
These edits are brought on by a very lucky 2008. In Flames, Of Dragons, The Hollowing, GlassWorks, ErRatic, and Emerald City were all released last year.
The sequel to ~In Trysts~ 
1 - "Fast paced and edgy tension highlights this passionate thriller. In Flames is a roller coaster ride of secrets and ghosts and sizzling sensuality. The plot line is solid and kept this reader guessing to the dramatic end. Marco and Sophia are likable individuals that I felt an affinity with from the opening. Melody Knight is an author whose back list I look forward to reading."
Lettetia Elasser, Affaire de Coeur July/August 2008
2 - "Her combustibility and the secrets of her past form the basis for this intriguing mystery." Literary Nymphs http://literarynymphsreviewsonly.blogspot.com/2008/07/in-flames.html http://www.lindenbayromance.com/product-inflames-144-149.html
EXCERPT
A death’s head grin. It was Gerald Beaumont.
“Sophie!” he cried, clawing at her head, her shoulders, climbing her like a bobbing tree. She was going under, down, when Marco snatched her out of Gerald’s grasp and flung him aside.
But Marco’s hold on her was tenuous, and Beaumont’s frantic antics cost him. Scratch, tear, rip, fling, but in the wildly swirling muddle, of dirt and bone, ash and wood, filthy foam and churning backwash, Sophie was jarred loose from Marco’s grasp once more, out of his reach. He heard her choked off “Marc-!” as she vanished beneath the rising waters.
Of Dragons
It'll eat you alive...
Nominated for Best SF/Fantasy Book of 2008 by LRC
Nominated for the Sir Julius Vogel Award 2008
REVIEWS
1 - "The story is filled with adventure, danger, and conflict. Now that Ryon and his friend know about Glynt's world can they just ignore it or should they get involved? Is Ryon really human as he believes or something more as Glynt believes? If you are looking for an unusual tale of adventure, the strength of the human spirit, and love all rolled into a fantasy story about other dimensions, then you will enjoy Of Dragons.
Reviewed by: Stephanie B." http://www.fallenangelreviews.com/2008/April/StephanieB-OfDragons.htm
"Of Dragons is a story that tells of how worlds are connected to each other and how love can become a reality for those who want it. " Literary Nymphs http://literarynymphsreviewsonly.blogspot.com/2008/06/of-dragons.html
No!
Her fingers clasped the adamantine dragonfly encircling her neck, as terror quickened her heartbeat. Chills raced down her limbs in spiky little arrays. That sound—that horrifying, buzzing thunder—was one she recognized, deep inside. The fear of them—and their appetites—had been bred into her through a hundred generations.
Glynt ran. Panicked, she fled the bedroom with its flimsy-looking glass and raced for the balcony doors. They were thick fire doors—surely, they could resist the impact?
Ten thousand dragonfly wings…
The daylight went. The thickness of the horde—the sheer mass—was blotting out the sun. Desperate, near-petrified, she yanked the curtains closed.
The ramming slam of ten thousand exoskeletonned bodies splintered the glass, but it didn’t stop the beating—that horrific, mechanical swish of their wings. They were driving themselves at the doors, at the glass, frenzied. Day sounds were lost in the ceaseless roar of overlying wing beats.
In the bedroom, the glass imploded. Shatters of refracted light caught her eye, as they showered the door jamb.
As they blasted through, onto the carpet.
I didn’t close the door.
Her eyes widened in horror, and she raced for the exit. She was nearly to the front door when it began vibrating. They were in the hall, in hunting mode, and desperate to get to her.
Hide.
Where?! Frantic, she ran back to the curtained windows, in hopes of fooling Them. She was out of her element, and hidey holes were nowhere to be found. She cowered down, wrapped herself in curtain fabric, and scrunched into her smallest form. Already, she knew it wouldn’t help—couldn’t help. They were lured. Starving. Driven. Those multifaceted eyes would find her.
Ever hungry, they’d hunt her…on the wing.
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The Hollowing
Nominated for the 2008 Sir Julius Vogel Award
REVIEW
1 - "This is an exceptionally, spine-tingling, gut wrenching thriller that takes you by the seat of your pants and have you gripping your chair while you turn each page. From ghosts to time-traveling you are always entertained by the adventure and excitement of this plot excellent dialogue and fabulous description gives you a great seat up front to all that is happening. This is a phenomenal read, and I recommend it highly. Wateena" http://www.coffeetimeromance.com/BookReviews/Thehollowing.html
2 - "The Hollowing is a well-written novel involving the modern day conclusions drawn from a long history of paranormal events coupled with the age-old theories of time travel. Here is an old idea presented in a new and spell-binding story that will surely be of interest to fans of any genre." Reviewer: Lucille P Robinson http://tjbook-list.blogspot.com/search/label/Authors%3A%20H
EXCERPT
Open the door.
But he couldn’t. His arm was rigid, his fingers clenched.
And he couldn’t make himself touch the knob.
Safe. Stay where you’re safe…
There was something waiting for him on the stairs. His impression of darkness—of The Hollowing—hadn’t been exaggerated. He stood there, shaking, and listened. Beyond the wooden partition the thick silence was giving way.
Breaking down the barriers.
Little whispers, small thuds, soft rustling cascades of movement.
Rats. Only rats.
Thuds and thunks. Rattles and clatters. And then a sound Shawn couldn’t attribute to anything else—the squeak and echo of a heavy tread on wood.
Someone was ascending the stairs.
Shawn was holding his breath so he could listen. He didn’t even realize it until his heart started throbbing in his ears. He stood there stiffly and listened to it coming.
The door’s unlocked. An invitation if ever there was one.
The knob was ice-cold beneath his fingers. The chill spread up his arm but he didn’t let it sway him. He squinted his eyes and yanked open the door.
The noise swept through him, carrying with it a rancid stink and a flurry of movement. He couldn’t see anything but darkness and there was noise all around him.
It was a fire. The crackling flames leapt up, roaring, popping, hissing. Screaming sizzles, mini explosions, whines of venting gas.
And then it was merely screams. Shouts that escalated to howls and shrieks. Terror. That’s what this was—terror. Old emotions, dredged up and waiting. The stink of must mingled with the rancid odor of burning hair. Shawn dropped to his knees, sick and sweating.
He fell down the stairs, hitting the landing with a gigantic crash. He couldn’t hear it though—couldn’t hear anything over the cacophony in his ears. In a half roll, half dive he splatted to the bottom floor and crawled, then pushed himself to his feet and staggered for the outer door.
It was closed. Locked. He yanked on the knob, fumbled with the lock but it wouldn’t give. He couldn’t get the hinges loose on the door. The pins were as tight as the lock. No way out.
He ran to the window and slammed the glass with a chair. Glass gave, bars didn’t. He rattled and shook and pounded.
Phone.
He yanked out his cell phone. It was dead.
Like me.
Around him the air seethed. It was transmitting itself to the furnishings. Chairs scraped, dust spiraled, papers flew.
Shawn barely noticed over the smoke pouring into his eyes.
There was only one way out. The upstairs room with its cool moonlight and empty spaces. Shawn flattened his hands over his ears, squinted his eyes and headed for the steps. His flesh was burning as he crawled, clambered and wriggled up the stairs.
At the top he slammed back the door and dove…
Onto a pyre of flame.
Open the door.
But he couldn’t. His arm was rigid, his fingers clenched.
And he couldn’t make himself touch the knob.
Safe. Stay where you’re safe…
There was something waiting for him on the stairs. His impression of darkness—of The Hollowing—hadn’t been exaggerated. He stood there, shaking, and listened. Beyond the wooden partition the thick silence was giving way.
Breaking down the barriers.
Little whispers, small thuds, soft rustling cascades of movement.
Rats. Only rats.
Thuds and thunks. Rattles and clatters. And then a sound Shawn couldn’t attribute to anything else—the squeak and echo of a heavy tread on wood.
Someone was ascending the stairs.
Shawn was holding his breath so he could listen. He didn’t even realize it until his heart started throbbing in his ears. He stood there stiffly and listened to it coming.
The door’s unlocked. An invitation if ever there was one.
The knob was ice-cold beneath his fingers. The chill spread up his arm but he didn’t let it sway him. He squinted his eyes and yanked open the door.
The noise swept through him, carrying with it a rancid stink and a flurry of movement. He couldn’t see anything but darkness and there was noise all around him.
It was a fire. The crackling flames leapt up, roaring, popping, hissing. Screaming sizzles, mini explosions, whines of venting gas.
And then it was merely screams. Shouts that escalated to howls and shrieks. Terror. That’s what this was—terror. Old emotions, dredged up and waiting. The stink of must mingled with the rancid odor of burning hair. Shawn dropped to his knees, sick and sweating.
He fell down the stairs, hitting the landing with a gigantic crash. He couldn’t hear it though—couldn’t hear anything over the cacophony in his ears. In a half roll, half dive he splatted to the bottom floor and crawled, then pushed himself to his feet and staggered for the outer door.
It was closed. Locked. He yanked on the knob, fumbled with the lock but it wouldn’t give. He couldn’t get the hinges loose on the door. The pins were as tight as the lock. No way out.
He ran to the window and slammed the glass with a chair. Glass gave, bars didn’t. He rattled and shook and pounded.
Phone.
He yanked out his cell phone. It was dead.
Like me.
Around him the air seethed. It was transmitting itself to the furnishings. Chairs scraped, dust spiraled, papers flew.
Shawn barely noticed over the smoke pouring into his eyes.
There was only one way out. The upstairs room with its cool moonlight and empty spaces. Shawn flattened his hands over his ears, squinted his eyes and headed for the steps. His flesh was burning as he crawled, clambered and wriggled up the stairs.
At the top he slammed back the door and dove…
Onto a pyre of flame.
Open the door.
But he couldn’t. His arm was rigid, his fingers clenched.
And he couldn’t make himself touch the knob.
Safe. Stay where you’re safe…
There was something waiting for him on the stairs. His impression of darkness—of The Hollowing—hadn’t been exaggerated. He stood there, shaking, and listened. Beyond the wooden partition the thick silence was giving way.
Breaking down the barriers.
Little whispers, small thuds, soft rustling cascades of movement.
Rats. Only rats.
Thuds and thunks. Rattles and clatters. And then a sound Shawn couldn’t attribute to anything else—the squeak and echo of a heavy tread on wood.
Someone was ascending the stairs.
Shawn was holding his breath so he could listen. He didn’t even realize it until his heart started throbbing in his ears. He stood there stiffly and listened to it coming.
The door’s unlocked. An invitation if ever there was one.
The knob was ice-cold beneath his fingers. The chill spread up his arm but he didn’t let it sway him. He squinted his eyes and yanked open the door.
The noise swept through him, carrying with it a rancid stink and a flurry of movement. He couldn’t see anything but darkness and there was noise all around him.
It was a fire. The crackling flames leapt up, roaring, popping, hissing. Screaming sizzles, mini explosions, whines of venting gas.
And then it was merely screams. Shouts that escalated to howls and shrieks. Terror. That’s what this was—terror. Old emotions, dredged up and waiting. The stink of must mingled with the rancid odor of burning hair. Shawn dropped to his knees, sick and sweating.
He fell down the stairs, hitting the landing with a gigantic crash. He couldn’t hear it though—couldn’t hear anything over the cacophony in his ears. In a half roll, half dive he splatted to the bottom floor and crawled, then pushed himself to his feet and staggered for the outer door.
It was closed. Locked. He yanked on the knob, fumbled with the lock but it wouldn’t give. He couldn’t get the hinges loose on the door. The pins were as tight as the lock. No way out.
He ran to the window and slammed the glass with a chair. Glass gave, bars didn’t. He rattled and shook and pounded.
Phone.
He yanked out his cell phone. It was dead.
Like me.
Around him the air seethed. It was transmitting itself to the furnishings. Chairs scraped, dust spiraled, papers flew.
Shawn barely noticed over the smoke pouring into his eyes.
There was only one way out. The upstairs room with its cool moonlight and empty spaces. Shawn flattened his hands over his ears, squinted his eyes and headed for the steps. His flesh was burning as he crawled, clambered and wriggled up the stairs.
At the top he slammed back the door and dove…
Onto a pyre of flame.
Reflected Moments...Refracted Terror
"I have to say I've read this one and LOVED it. "
Debbie
Author of Infidelity (www.deborahgould.com )
EXCERPT
Cate picked up the slab of glass from its tilted resting spot. It had dropped nearly intact. Her fingers shook as the first tracings of shimmery silica began to move beneath the surface. All those crystalline lattices somehow rearranging themselves…
She froze, her breath frosting the glass from the sudden chill. Gooseflesh rose on her skin as the air around her grew cold.
It had never happened this way before.
The man was lying there, in the glass, his body sprawled with the indignity of all things dead and unburied. Cate's breath caught in her throat, the unspent fog almost choking her. Oh, God!
It wasn't here—hadn't happened here—but it was happening now.
There was an argument lingering, on the air. She couldn't see the moment of confrontation, or the altercation, but it had been about the mutilated body on the ground. About how to deal with it, to cast off blame with as much ease as they'd cast away his life.
Only, they didn't realize he could hear them still. Hear them and hate them.
Because it had always been about his looks. His looks, and justifying what he was. The grave they were giving him, the twisted notoriety they were planning, would leave him neither looks nor justice.
Cate's eyes focused on his face. What they'd done, what they were doing to the rest of him didn't bear watching.
But, apparently, she did. Bear watching, that is.
The corpse's eyes opened, to stare straight at her.
Cate flinched, twitched, recoiled, but she couldn't let go. Some part of her was screaming, but she was no longer sure whether it was her...or him.
She clung to the pane, trapped. When, a forever it seemed, later, she freed her fingers enough to fling it, she remained there rigid, staring, as the moonglow image shattered in a hundred spiky shards.
Some part of her was still recoiling, as if in reflex to a striking snake.
God help me!
In those instants of metaphysical contact, she felt as though one shriveled digit had touched her. Spanned the gap between life and death—
I'm not a medium!
She'd never been a medium—never even come close. It had been the one blessing, in an otherwise twisted gift, that however conversant she might have become with a dead person's past, she was never conversant with the dead!
Until now, it seemed. Cate backed away, panted white puffs coiling and twisting in the otherwise still air.
I'm not alone.
It should have been comforting, that there was a taxi driver waiting just outside, but somehow, it came out differently. That "I'm not alone" was filled with horror. The taxi driver might be outside, but something else moved within. In a dreadful moment, she knew she'd brought this on herself—that by coming here she'd been willing, demanding almost, a contact with his person—had wanted so badly to save him, that she'd drawn in a soul barely severed from its body.
Cate backed, tripped, twisted, and ran. She tore the length of the room as though the Devil were at her heels, and slammed open the end door with a loud squawking thunk. Using two hands, Cate wrenched the door closed again, locking evil within. She stumbled back, the small door pane fixing her into its framed panel.
He wasn't within. Behind her, his hatred ever so much more pronounced in proximity, was the mutilated visage of the recently deceased.
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Reviews
1- "I just finished reading ErRatic and must tell you I enjoyed it IMMENSELY!" Ruth
2 - "A thoroughly enjoyable and entertaining tale that offers as much thrill as it does amusement, ERRATIC is not to be missed.
Kathy Samuels
Romance Reviews Today" http://www.romrevtoday.com/
EXCERPT
Emma glanced blearily at the clock. Three a.m., and Studley obviously needed to go out. He was whimpering, deep in his throat, and his cold nose kept nudging her arm.
Damn dog! She reached out and gave the silky coat a pat. Zombie-like, she stumbled across the room, to the front door, and unfastened the lock. “Out!” she commanded, punctuating it with a squeaky yawn.
When she opened her eyes again, the man was standing on the grass, just off the porch.
It was a very small porch.
She slammed the door and locked it, then raced through the house. She kept picturing Him running, trying to beat her to the back door.
It’s locked. It’s got to be locked.
It was, but she didn’t feel any better. No one had any business standing there, on her property, at three in the morning. He was up to no good.
She ran for the kitchen and picked up a knife in one hand and the phone in the other. The knife shook in her frozen fingers. Not a good thing. He’ll use it on me.
He damn well better not try. Her shadowy reflection in the window glass was that of a madwoman, brandishing a blade. Her staccato movements glinted across the toaster face, and she jumped, slashing the air.
Hysteria burbled up, like an unwanted belch, before sense clunked in with a nearly audible jolt. Window. Nightlight. He’ll see me. Frantic, she dropped onto the floor, and punched in a fumbling “911”.
If he saw me, I hope he saw the knife, too.
She shouted into the phone, “There was—!”, realized she was shouting, and quickly hissed, “There was a man!”
Why the hell hadn’t Studley barked?! The damned dog had practically dumped her in the killer’s lap!
The Police Operator was offering instructions now, and Emma listened to them blankly. She’d just recalled something very pertinent to her case.
“N-Never mind,” she said, replacing the receiver with shaking hands.
A dream. It had to be a dream.
But it wasn’t and she knew it. It was what she’d tell them, though, when they asked.
She sat there, huddled, too scared to challenge the near-dark. Her eyes were already scrunched closed, but now she drew up her knees and buried her face in her arms.
Shielded. Safer.
Not really.
She couldn’t afford to move now, even if it meant lighting the house. She was too afraid of what she might see.
She nestled her head deeper, to block her ears.
Too afraid of what she might hear.
She hummed a little whimper, deep in her throat the way Studley had. Just enough noise to challenge any other whimpers in the room.
When they came with the squad car to check out her call, she’d have to get up—but not till then. Then, it’d be okay—maybe even safe.
Why hadn’t Studley barked? That one was easy—now that she’d remembered.
About Studley.
He’d been dead—for almost a week.
Loving, lustful...living?
Egypt...Archeology...Romance
The heat ate at her skin. The wretched sun was a beast which had also eaten her thermometer, so she couldn't even brag to friends back home how tough she was. Claudia lifted her head, but there was no breeze off the Red Sea. The sight of all that water held promise, though.
The heat ate at her skin. The wretched sun was a beast which had also eaten her thermometer, so she couldn't even brag to friends back home how tough she was. Claudia lifted her head, but there was no breeze off the Red Sea. The sight of all that water held promise, though.
And she was no ancient Egyptian. If I'd lived here, I would have fought to go to sea. No conscription necessary.
Berenike was a dead city now—all ruins—but it had once been a thriving port. Hot and beaten down.
And dummy me, I'm still standing in the bloody sun! Her scalp was on fire, and the pounding of her heart echoed in her head. That's all I need, first day out—heat stroke.
Making a name for myself already…
She forced her boot-clad feet beyond trudge and popped behind a ruined wall, to squat on a pile of stone. It made a sandy scrape, rattle and crack, but she was beyond doing dainty. She reminded herself she was supposed to be revering these slabs—treating them with respect.
My butt will be perfectly respectful, thank you very much. Amazing how heat waves could generate sarcasm—or maybe that was her mind revolting against the lack of oxygen. Hell, the air was so hot she couldn't even breathe!
Ingrate. Well, that much was true, anyway. Claudia made herself close her eyes and suck a deep, hot…tolerant…breath.
She willed herself to relax, and lulled by warmth, dozed. Everyone else was smart enough to be napping, too. Nobody worked in the day's full heat. Only newbies like her went wandering, wanting to soak in atmosphere and ending up needing to soak up a couple of day's bed rest instead. She'd heard the stories. So now, she chased the shade as the sun moved, stretching out behind the wall and resting her head on a stone shaped very much like the headrests used by the ancients. Her conclusion-jumping fully in gear, she wanted to shout "artifact!"—to pick up the curved Y of rock and go running to the Prof. Intuition told her there might be something in it…
Until she recalled something else she'd heard. Newbies are always good for a laugh. So instead, she stretched out amidst the broken stones and rested her neck on the curve.
Queen of Egypt.
She spared a thought for scorpions in the rocks, then tossed it aside. Damn them if they could venture out in this blasted heat to do their hunting. Maybe they'd be as wary of her as she should have been of them, but at the moment, ignorance made a happy shield. What I don't know can't kill me.
She lay there, far from sound sleep, but definitely dozy. The dirt layer coating the floor was comfy in its way, and if she were to open her eyes to slits, she could almost imagine this as a complete building, even looking as it did, with no roof and a fourth wall missing. Rather like a studio set.
I could live here. Who needed walls in temperatures like this?
Somebody did. She peered at the almost haphazard piling of rock on rock, then realized it couldn't have been all that haphazard and have remained standing for twenty-five hundred years. She sat up then, running her fingers over the mismatched layers. Same stone, different sizes.
Precious. Quarried and carried here by hand, camel, boat. Each stone valued, utilized. There were no chinks in the layers that she could see, which meant they'd been well-fitted. Either that or they'd been filled over the centuries with sand.
Every hollow I possess now has a sprinkling of the stuff. She used her pinkie to pick sand out of her ear.
Her elbow was still up, her pose awkward, when the chill hit. It started in her shoulder blades, then shivered down her arms, the hair standing in salute. Her nape strands were already dancing, and her back crawled with what felt like a dozen scorpions. Icy scorpions, which sent shivers shunting down both legs…
Damn!
Was it worse to think profanity in the face of phantasms?
"Bloody hell!" she griped. "I thought for sure you couldn't follow me here. Or does the heat remind you of home?"
She glanced over to the corner of the ruin, and spotted a wave of movement that had nothing to do with rising heat. The distortion bent and disordered those orderly stacked stones, but to her heat-dried eyes it shimmered almost like a waterfall. For a moment she was tempted…
"I know it's you. You're unhealthy—that's what you are! I'm here to burn you out of my system!"
And with that, she booted aside old stone and precious block, stood, and tromped back to the camp.
Some men never learn.
Not even after they're dead.
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Open the door.
But he couldn’t. His arm was rigid, his fingers clenched.
And he couldn’t make himself touch the knob.
Safe. Stay where you’re safe…
There was something waiting for him on the stairs. His impression of darkness—of The Hollowing—hadn’t been exaggerated. He stood there, shaking, and listened. Beyond the wooden partition the thick silence was giving way.
Breaking down the barriers.
Little whispers, small thuds, soft rustling cascades of movement.
Rats. Only rats.
Thuds and thunks. Rattles and clatters. And then a sound Shawn couldn’t attribute to anything else—the squeak and echo of a heavy tread on wood.
Someone was ascending the stairs.
Shawn was holding his breath so he could listen. He didn’t even realize it until his heart started throbbing in his ears. He stood there stiffly and listened to it coming.
The door’s unlocked. An invitation if ever there was one.
The knob was ice-cold beneath his fingers. The chill spread up his arm but he didn’t let it sway him. He squinted his eyes and yanked open the door.
The noise swept through him, carrying with it a rancid stink and a flurry of movement. He couldn’t see anything but darkness and there was noise all around him.
It was a fire. The crackling flames leapt up, roaring, popping, hissing. Screaming sizzles, mini explosions, whines of venting gas.
And then it was merely screams. Shouts that escalated to howls and shrieks. Terror. That’s what this was—terror. Old emotions, dredged up and waiting. The stink of must mingled with the rancid odor of burning hair. Shawn dropped to his knees, sick and sweating.
He fell down the stairs, hitting the landing with a gigantic crash. He couldn’t hear it though—couldn’t hear anything over the cacophony in his ears. In a half roll, half dive he splatted to the bottom floor and crawled, then pushed himself to his feet and staggered for the outer door.
It was closed. Locked. He yanked on the knob, fumbled with the lock but it wouldn’t give. He couldn’t get the hinges loose on the door. The pins were as tight as the lock. No way out.
He ran to the window and slammed the glass with a chair. Glass gave, bars didn’t. He rattled and shook and pounded.
Phone.
He yanked out his cell phone. It was dead.
Like me.
Around him the air seethed. It was transmitting itself to the furnishings. Chairs scraped, dust spiraled, papers flew.
Shawn barely noticed over the smoke pouring into his eyes.
There was only one way out. The upstairs room with its cool moonlight and empty spaces. Shawn flattened his hands over his ears, squinted his eyes and headed for the steps. His flesh was burning as he crawled, clambered and wriggled up the stairs.
At the top he slammed back the door and dove…
Onto a pyre of flame.
Sophie lost him in the smoke and steam. She screamed, choked on soot and swallowed water—then it was all gagging, paddling, churning her way through the wash. The surge was relentless, all troughs and waves, floating wood and falling stone. She was slammed against the wall and felt her shoulder give. Sophie shrieked and fought for air.
“Marco!”
He had her. Marco grabbed her, and clung. She held onto him weakly, and opened her eyes to find he was smiling.
New Release - THE HOLLOWING
AUTHOR: N. D. Hansen-Hill BLURB: Shawn Walsh's problems don't arise from his own troubled past but from someone else's. Fires, floods, battles, bone-rattling quakes — he's frequently an unwilling and horrified participant in events long gone. For when The Hollowing claims him, his present dissolves. BOOK LINK:>>http://www.cerridwenpress.com/productpage.asp?ISBN=9781419916465<< AUTHOR WEBSITES: N. D. Hansen-Hill | Melody Knight EXCERPT: Open the door. But he couldn’t. His arm was rigid, his fingers clenched. And he couldn’t make himself touch the knob. Safe. Stay where you’re safe… There was something waiting for him on the stairs. His impression of darkness—of The Hollowing—hadn’t been exaggerated. He stood there, shaking, and listened. Beyond the wooden partition the thick silence was giving way. Breaking down the barriers. Little whispers, small thuds, soft rustling cascades of movement. Rats. Only rats. Thuds and thunks. Rattles and clatters. And then a sound Shawn couldn’t attribute to anything else—the squeak and echo of a heavy tread on wood. Someone was ascending the stairs. Shawn was holding his breath so he could listen. He didn’t even realize it until his heart started throbbing in his ears. He stood there stiffly and listened to it coming. The door’s unlocked. An invitation if ever there was one. The knob was ice-cold beneath his fingers. The chill spread up his arm but he didn’t let it sway him. He squinted his eyes and yanked open the door. The noise swept through him, carrying with it a rancid stink and a flurry of movement. He couldn’t see anything but darkness and there was noise all around him. It was a fire. The crackling flames leapt up, roaring, popping, hissing. Screaming sizzles, mini explosions, whines of venting gas. And then it was merely screams. Shouts that escalated to howls and shrieks. Terror. That’s what this was—terror. Old emotions, dredged up and waiting. The stink of must mingled with the rancid odor of burning hair. Shawn dropped to his knees, sick and sweating. He fell down the stairs, hitting the landing with a gigantic crash. He couldn’t hear it though—couldn’t hear anything over the cacophony in his ears. In a half roll, half dive he splatted to the bottom floor and crawled, then pushed himself to his feet and staggered for the outer door. It was closed. Locked. He yanked on the knob, fumbled with the lock but it wouldn’t give. He couldn’t get the hinges loose on the door. The pins were as tight as the lock. No way out. He ran to the window and slammed the glass with a chair. Glass gave, bars didn’t. He rattled and shook and pounded. Phone. He yanked out his cell phone. It was dead. Like me. Around him the air seethed. It was transmitting itself to the furnishings. Chairs scraped, dust spiraled, papers flew. Shawn barely noticed over the smoke pouring into his eyes. There was only one way out. The upstairs room with its cool moonlight and empty spaces. Shawn flattened his hands over his ears, squinted his eyes and headed for the steps. His flesh was burning as he crawled, clambered and wriggled up the stairs. At the top he slammed back the door and dove… Onto a pyre of flame.
GENRE: Fantasy/Time Travel
PUBLISHER: Cerridwen Press
ISBN: 978-1-60202-061-0
RATING: PG
Unfortunately, his problems have everything to do with family and his rather questionable heritage — with a birthright he'd rather know nothing about. Lost and tossed about by destiny, trapped and extorted by those long deceased, he's tired of playing a victim.
And he refuses to give up hope. There is still a chance he'll be able to resolve his issues without dying, given the right place… And enough time.
New Release: OF DRAGONS

AUTHOR: Melody Knight
GENRE: Mainstream Romance Sci-Fi/Fantasy
PUBLISHER: Red Rose Publishing
ISBN: 978-1-60435-077-7
RATING: Explicit sexual content
BLURB: Ryon Colley can't understand what's happening to his life. This morning, he was a policeman investigating a potential hazard: a sparking, flashing, rainbow-spitting light show in the sky overhead. The source of the odd light appeared to be an unruly-haired blonde hellion, who couldn't figure out what normal was. Her radiant display scared him, but his physical reaction to it scares him more. By lunchtime he's gone from having coarse brown hair, to sporting a head full of blond locks—and from facing felons, to fending off thousands of voracious dragonflies.
Glynt has been sent to Earth to guard the dimensional gateways, but her arrival spawns nothing but trouble. Quite accidentally, she's summoned swarms of dragonflies, and lured in captors determined to return her—clearly a mischief maker—to her own world. Only Ryon—her gilded hero and the object of her newfound dreams—can rescue her from certain death.
AUTHOR WEBSITES: N. D. Hansen-Hill | Melody Knight
EXCERPT: She was nearly dressed when she heard them. The vibration rattled the shiny Christmas ornaments on her dressing table, making the glass ping harshly against the table top.No!
Her fingers clasped the adamantine dragonfly encircling her neck, as terror quickened her heartbeat. Chills raced down her limbs in spiky little arrays. That sound—that horrifying, buzzing thunder—was one she recognized, deep inside. The fear of them—and their appetites—had been bred into her through a hundred generations.
Glynt ran. Panicked, she fled the bedroom with its flimsy-looking glass and raced for the balcony doors. They were thick fire doors—surely, they could resist the impact?
Ten thousand dragonfly wings…
The daylight went. The thickness of the horde—the sheer mass—was blotting out the sun. Desperate, near-petrified, she yanked the curtains closed.
The ramming slam of ten thousand exoskeletonned bodies splintered the glass, but it didn’t stop the beating—that horrific, mechanical swish of their wings. They were driving themselves at the doors, at the glass, frenzied. Day sounds were lost in the ceaseless roar of overlying wing beats.
In the bedroom, the glass imploded. Shatters of refracted light caught her eye, as they showered the door jamb.
As they blasted through, onto the carpet.
I didn’t close the door.
Her eyes widened in horror, and she raced for the exit. She was nearly to the front door when it began vibrating. They were in the hall, in hunting mode, and desperate to get to her.
Hide.
Where?! Frantic, she ran back to the curtained windows, in hopes of fooling Them. She was out of her element, and hidey holes were nowhere to be found. She cowered down, wrapped herself in curtain fabric, and scrunched into her smallest form. Already, she knew it wouldn’t help—couldn’t help. They were lured. Starving. Driven. Those multifaceted eyes would find her.
Ever hungry, they’d hunt her…on the wing.
News & Networking
Phew!
Only BloodWorks is waiting in the works. If I have any time left, I'd like to get Art & Soul, Artifact, and Sqweams rewritten and out to publishers this month, but the month is going quickly...
WIP: my haunted house story is sitting at 38,400 words, and I only plan on bringing it up to just over 50K. You'd think I'd be able to just whip that out, wouldn't ya? It's going veeeerrry slowly.
Other things: I have interviews this week on both Crystal Adkins' new interview site, and the Fallen Angels Review Blog (scroll down until you find my work). The FAR blog has numerous excerpts from my books, so if you'd like a sample of my writing, please pop over there in thanks to Cindy for doing such a nice job. Crystal is also working hard to develop her two sites (interview and review), so please consider paying her a visit.
Friends of Note: Yvonne Eve Walus has made the grade! She's one of the Amazon Finalists. A bit about her, and her book, Substitute Wives (in Yvonne's own words):
"I'm one of those women who are unable to have one night stands. Sex is a very intimate thing for me. So the idea of selling it to strangers has always puzzled me: what circumstances would make a woman go through with it on a regular basis? That's how "Substitute wives" was born, a literary novel that claims marriage is prostitution dressed up. Joy is a twenty-three year old sex worker who has over a million dollars of inherited money in her bank account. She donates all her earnings to charity, goes to church and is counting the days she has left as a sex worker before she can return home to reconcile with her family. When a married client declares his love for her, Joy tries to let him down gently, and falls for his clichés in the process. Joy's friend and co-worker, Caro, refuses to take her stalker seriously, even though she knows that her past is bound to catch up with her and endanger the safe haven Caro has created for her daughter. Theirs is not the world of drugs or pimps or backstreet quickies. They charge top dollar, they are in control of their lives and of the choices they've made and they realise that the glitter that surrounds them is only skin-deep. Based in Auckland, New Zealand, the book delivers emotional punch by telling the story of everyday ever-important relationships: between a father and a daughter, between a daughter and a mother, between husbands and wives and substitute wives. You can find my entry on Amazon.com via the following link:
http://www.amazon.com/dp/B001200CFK"
Please consider visiting Yvonne's entry and voting. Every opinion counts!
Yay! ***
Tempter (I may want to stick this in a book some time): functional Magnetic Resonance Imaging scans indicate that culture has a physiological impact on the brain, that can be seen in brain activity patterns. Culture has long been thought to affect development in terms of eating patterns, environmental influences, and tastes, but it can now be seen to affect perspective and judgment. Alterations to brain activity occur in exposure to other cultures for as little as six months. Read more. Sounds like an excellent reason to travel, and definitely contradicts the "old dogs can't learn new tricks". It may never be too late to change our outlook!
Save Your World: learn and donate at the same time. Free rice is donated for every correct word. I LOVE this charity!
Now, an excerpt from one of my books - Static (paperback), methinks. Enjoy!
Today he'd found a path he'd never taken before—and he'd already promised himself he'd never take it again. Nature had been communing with him big time. He'd been tramping for less than two hours when the skies suddenly opened. Rain and hail—and they were coming down so hard it hurt. Nate was soaked before he could drag his rain gear out of his bag...
Good thing Aje isn't here, Nate thought. I'd never hear the end of this…
I probably won't, anyway. Aje, despite his protestations, would have half an ear tuned on the weather report.
Nate had never expected him or Brandon to come along. It was just a way of covering his ass, without sacrificing his pride. Brandon always insisted he needed to tell someone when he was going hiking on his own, and Aje had been adamant about it since that ledge goof-up. So, he'd tell them, they'd give him a hard time, and that was that. Except he'd always get a call on Sunday—just in case. In Aje's words, "If I have to save your stupid hide, I want to know before I make other plans."
Nate's thoughts were interrupted by a loud rumble, and a flash of brilliant white, that lit up half the sky. Lightning!
No! It was the thing that terrified him more than anything else. The thing that sometimes invaded his dreams. There was probably some name for it—for this kind of irrational terror, but right now, he didn't know—or care. The lightning was coming—heading his way.
A burst of adrenaline shot through him and he started to run, slipping and sliding in the muck and leaves. Panicked, he ran off the trail, heading toward an overhanging knob of rock.
Solid. Safe. It can't get me there.
It's okay, Leighton. You'll make it…
Only, he wouldn't. It was at his back, watching him ominously from the skies, and it was going to get him.
There was a tingling in his shoulder blades.
It was going to stab him, right in the back.
He'd never told anyone. How, when a lightning storm came, he'd hide behind the door, or in a closet. Deep in his house, or burrowed beneath the desk in his office.
His mother had said he'd been struck once, when he was little. A baby. He didn't remember it, but some part of him did. He'd been running from the stuff ever since.
It was coming. His hair was standing on end and his gooseflesh was doing a shivery dance. The pressure in the air was so thick he couldn't breathe…
The next moment, his world exploded, and was gone—in a massive blast of overwhelming white.
Cheers,ND | Melody
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Have a fantastic New Year in 2008!
Happy New Year! It's a little early, but New Zealand really celebrates family in summer, and it's our summer now (December, January, February). My family's going on holiday down island, and when I return it'll be time for a writers' retreat at the end of the month. Very exciting, all of it, and I can't wait to leave.
I imagine Auckland City will have fireworks for New Year's Eve, and I'm hopeful they'll have bands playing this year. It's so fun for the entire family and I really enjoy it.
In Flames is being released January 1st, but you can already find it and my February release, ErRatic, on Amazon! I just discovered, too, that I have a number of titles in Kindle editions (17 or 18!). It's great to be part of a new technology.
I'll leave you with an excerpt from In Flames today:
She was standing in the middle of the biggest pen, which was filled with her cows. “I feel...” she paused, wanting to get the word just right, “needed.” She was standing there grinning, when her nose wrinkled. “D’you smell somethin’ burning?” She twisted, and Peri spotted it. The back of Sophie’s jacket was alight. Saffron-yellow and orange flames, thick and fierce, started small, at the hem, then fluttered and coiled and raced up her back. Sophie was screaming now, flapping at the flames she could reach, while cattle snorted and surged against her, their stomping feet trampling hers, while others bumped and butted, trying to get clear of the fire.
Peri got cow punched, rolled, and was back up, but she still couldn’t see Sophie. Sophie had to be down on the ground somewhere, in the dirt and straw. Peri clambered across cow backs, as they shifted and mooed and lowed and bounded beneath her. She got dumped off a wide hide practically in Sophie's lap.
Sophie was sitting there, sobbing quietly between gasping breaths. The happy little jacket was charred pink and white now—and the shirt beneath wasn’t much better.Cheers, and best wishes for your holidays,
ND|Melody (for updates and more excerpts, add me as a friend at MySpace)
Happy Holidays!
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Crystals
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Shades
Fire
Light
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Light Play
Light Plays
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Static
BloodWorks
Relic
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Graven Image
Grave Imagery
Grave Image
Vision
The Hollowing
Romance (writing as Melody Knight)
Romantic Suspense
In Trysts
In Flames
Romantic Fantasy
Of Dragons
SF Romance
GlassWorks
Paranormal Romance
Art & Soul
Novella (writing as Melody Knight)
Erotic
Artifact
Emerald City
Gray Beginnings has been signed by CP!

I've been really lucky, and now have had Gray Beginnings picked up by Cerridwen Press. They already publish Gilded Folly, and have contracted The Hollowing, and now...Gray Beginnings. Very exciting stuff!
This gives me quite a release lineup for next year: In Flames (joins In Trysts at Linden Bay Publishing) in January, ErRatic (Five Star release) in February, The Hollowing in March/April (Cerridwen Press), and Gray Beginnings in ?.
Other things: working on my first YA novel, Sqweams. This is actually #3 in my Elf Chronicles, and I'm LOVING writing it. The brief calls for 50,000 words, and since I'm at 35,000 now, it's time to strart wrapping up the action. Then, it's on to that erotic novella, which still needs 20,000 words before the end of the month - yikes!
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Cheers,
Just finished the edits for ErRatic!

I'm so pleased! This is my birthday week, and the edit for ErRatic came through. It was like a birthday present to myself to get it finished.
What a wonderful week! Everyone has outdone themselves with gifts and coffee outings, and invitations to dinner - and that's not all! There have been Happy Birthday emails from around the world. I feel so very happy!
I have all my books out to publishers, and am awaiting decisions on the last 6. "No" isn't a bad thing, because I have other publishers keen to get the work, so it's just a matter of time and timing. I don't want to assume a negative, and send the book off elsewhere then hear I've disappointed an editor. Bad form!
Three essays left to go over the next week. I have to get over birthday and get back to working on Uni stuff. I'm just still in celebration and book completion mode. I'm not even working on #29 and #30 right now!
I'll leave you with a bit of Gilded Folly. It's coming out in paperback soon, so watch for it on Amazon!
Cheers,
ND (http://www.NDHansen-Hill.com) | Melody (http://MelodyKnight.com)
Rom crawled through the daisies, burying his face in the turgid branches. He snatched at flowers with mosquito-bitten hands, crunching the heads and rubbing them over his swollen face. The pastel masses of blooms were crushed and flattened, leaving streaked and bloodied blossoms in his wake.
His breaths were panting rasps, ragged and uneven. His chest was filling, his throat was closing, and he couldn’t breathe. Using his elbows and his knees, he squirmed his way along.
The water. If he could just get to the water. He could see it now through squinted eyes—a black wash in the foreground. Gritting his teeth, he lifted his head, and peered at the moon reflected on the surface. The castaway radiance beckoned him forward, and he crawled, his breaths coming in whiny wheezes.
Mosquitoes danced into his vision, feathering his eyelids, tickling his eyebrows, darting in stinging raids to feed on his scalp. In such proximity, it was difficult to put them into perspective. They were garish monsters come to steal his life force away. Dancing devils, gossamer harbingers of death...
He had a defence, but only if he lived long enough to use it. Only if he could reach the reflected moon. It had always been his trigger...before.
Stay the impulse. The warning sang loudly in his ears. It will bring them in. You will no longer be able to hide in your dreams.
Surely, it was too late to hide. What was happening to him tonight had forced him to emerge from the shadows.
Shivering incessantly, Rom pushed himself to his feet. Gagging and choking, he lurched forward, nearly falling on his face. In a stumbling near-run, he took five long, loping strides and leapt, soaring across the dark, watery surface of the pond.
At the same moment he stretched out his hand, aiming desperately for that bright white globe of reflected light.
His fingertips touched, then pierced the surface.
The pseudo moon shattered, into a thousand dancing pieces.
At Cerridwen Press (http://www.cerridwenpress.com/productpage.asp?ISBN=1-4199-0409-4)
January has been so busy!

My book, ErRatic, was contracted by Five Star just before Christmas, and life's been full on ever since. I've had rewrites to do, plus I have a book to finish for Linden Bay Romance as well, called In Flames. Everything has to be rewritten, neatly packaged and tidily ready to go to these two publishers by the end of February.
Which is good, but a little nerve-wracking! I'm scared to blow this in some way, but I'm going to do my best to produce a couple of quality books.
I've also been working on promotion. Firstly, book trailers. I've done one for my latest release, In Trysts, the prequel to In Flames. You can see it at one of my author websites, MelodyKnight.com , or at http://flash-movies.toufee.com/mov/32861168994619 . I also did one for my friend Jane, author of Be My Valentine (www.janebeckenham.com) at http://flash-movies.toufee.com/mov/36371169692268 . I really enjoyed doing these! They were time-consuming, but really fun.
I'm painting again. Not the best work, but I think it will get better. I just haven't had much practice in such a long time that I'm not very good at it. Still, my worst critics are my kids, and they seem to like the one I just produced (no pic yet, sorry!), which encourages me to carry on. Maybe it's just that I'm under work pressure at the moment for my writing, but it makes me keen to be at the easel!
Other things: archaeology study again, beginning late February. I'm very excited about it. Should be thrilling!
You can find excerpts for my books on my main website (www.NDHansen-Hill.com), including the one for ErRatic. I have an R17 excerpt on my Melody site, too.
Cheers,
ND/Melody
Palliser Bay & a Human Presence, Jean Drew (a rising NZ star), & an excerpt from STATIC!
The fear of not being able to provide for our families is a devastating thing, and I was considering it in the light of prehistory. We were studying the first Maori villages in Palliser Bay yesterday, and among the artefacts were fishhooks, carved of bone.
Human presence tends to have marked effects on the environment. At one point, survival became a little rough in Palliser Bay, as indicated by the materials left behind - smaller shells, a change in fishing and birding...and the absence of some species altogether. Part of this may have been environmeental. Gardens were important to these people, but the weather may not have supported much horticulture. The people became hungry, and subject to disease.
It’s written in their bones.
So, they moved...we’re not certain where. Inland. Many groups have done this, in search of survival. The environment frequently rebounds after an exodus, so it works out well - or has, for tens of thousands of years.
One interesting point, which came out of this - the Maori had no forts, or fortified pa, in Palliser Bay during tmes of abundance. The fortifications only arose when scarcity hit the land/sea, and foodstuffs needed protecting. Survival strategy. Maybe we, as humans, should seriously consider what needs protecting and when - and what should be shared, instead. We’ve taken away the ability, in many cases, to move to richer surroundings. Without that ancient strategy, how will some of us survive?
I heard last week I’m being published again - in nonficton this time. THE COMPLETE WRITER’S JOURNAL is being released in a few weeks...and I’m lucky enough to be included. Lucky, indeed, considering the esteemed company!
Today’s writer is Jean Drew. Jean is one of the emerging stars of NZ literature, and her shelf is swiftly becoming laden with trophies. She’s a good author to read, and an even better one to know, because she’s smart, and a great friend. She goes out of her way to help other writers within an impossibly busy schedule, so do her a favour and read her books. You can find her on Amazon.
As always, I’ll leave you with an excerpt! Enjoy your April!
ND
N. D. Hansen-Hill
http://www.fictionwise.com/ebooks/NDHansen-Hillebooks.htm (all my EBOOKS...except Gilded Folly)
http://www.lulu.com/NDHansen-Hill (my PAPERBACKS)
http://www.NDHansen-Hill.com (my website)
http://www.cerridwenpress.com/productpage.asp?ISBN=1-4199-0409-4 (Gilded Folly)
Included in “The Complete Writer’s Journal,” available in late April or early May from Red Engine Press (http://www.redenginepress.com)
Chapter Three
"You look good."
She looked lousy, but Jim knew better than to tell her so. She was white and her eyes were watery from coughing. The dark circles underneath didn’t help much, either.
Still, it beat the blue colour she’d been when he’d pulled her out of the water. Or that dead white he’d seen outside the emergency room.
"Feeling great," she croaked.
Jim pushed the chair forward with his foot, then plopped into it. "Donna’s gonna come see you tomorrow. She would’ve come tonight, but Kirsten’s got the sniffles."
Chaz blew her nose loudly. "I can sympathise."
Jim grinned. "‘Better out than in’. Want a bucket? Maybe a big towel to hang under your chin?"
"You’re disgusting. Thank God Donna doesn’t know what you’re really like."
"Oh, she knows." He booted the bed. "Says she pities you, and that I’m only allowed to ‘inflict my company on you for fifteen minutes at a time’."
"She does know you," Chaz said tiredly.
Jim noticed. "My fifteen minutes’re up. I’ll report to Hollebeck that you’re feisty, but unfit."
She frowned. "Are you serious?"
"About the reporting? No." He grinned. "But maybe if I file one I’ll get paid for that gagworthy meal I just ate."
"Get out, Casavas." She smiled. "Tell Donna I can’t wait to see her—but to leave you at home." She added with a grin, "It always amazes me how a woman with so much taste found someone as tasteless as you."
"Hey, I’m not the only one who knows how to pick ’em. Hollebeck’s checking out your two-legged defibrillator."
She sat up abruptly, which started her coughing. She finally managed to choke out, "What?"
Jim pushed her back against the pillows. He’d been wondering how to bring it up. She needed to hear what had happened—and it was better coming from him. He sat down again. "Do you remember much?"
Her eyes darkened. "Delgado’s face. Air bubbles streaming past my head." Tears welled up in her eyes, and gooseflesh danced on her skin.
Casavas saw, and put a hand on her arm. "You were dead, Chaz. I could’ve sworn…" He sounded choked, and he gave her arm a squeeze. "I couldn’t find you at first—then, when I did—"
She laid a hand over his, in an effort to reassure him. "I don’t remember any of it."
"We—they—did CPR for twenty minutes, Chaz, before the helicopter got there. I rode back with you, so they could treat my hand."
She knew it wasn’t the only reason. He was her partner, and he’d gone with her as a mark of respect.
The way I would have if he’d been the one to die…
Dead. Her limbs went icy, and her heart started pounding. "Jim—"
He looked at her—at the pasty lips and the white face. "Fuck it!" he said, pushing the bell for the nurse. "Sorry, Chaz," he muttered, fussing around. He tossed another blanket over her, then took off his jacket and plunked it onto her feet. "Sorry I said anything…"
She didn’t remember him leaving, but he must have hung around outside, because she was almost asleep when he came back in. "I’m sorry—" he began again.
"Tell me about—my ‘two-legged defibrillator’."
"Word is, he shot off lightning bolts all over the ER."
She thought he was kidding. "Lightning bolts?"
"Arcs or bolts, or whatever they’re called. He dove on top of you—" he chuckled at her expression, "—then proceeded to fry both your brains out. A real ‘shocker’, I heard. Whatever he did, it woke you up."
She lay there for a moment, staring at the wall but not really seeing it. "He was in a red robe."
"Yep. Bright red and dressed for action. Only action he got, though, was taking up where you’d left off. They managed to resuscitate him, but everything else they’ve done has backfired."
"Is Hollebeck going to drop it?"
Jim shrugged. "Maybe. Depends on what he finds out."
"I owe him."
"Hollebeck?" Jim grinned.
"Very funny."
"You don’t owe him any ‘action’, if that’s what you mean." Jim snickered.
"Tell Donna I pity her. Get out, Casavas."
"Gone." As he reached the door, he turned back. "By the way, I’m with you, Chaz—on the Leighton issue."
She looked at him blankly.
"The guy in the red robe." He hesitated, not wanting to upset her again. "Without his little energy blast, all that hot air I gave you would’ve been wasted. I owe him, too."
She smiled. "Jim—thanks. For everything."
"My pleasure," he told her lasciviously, wiggling his eyebrows. Then, grinning widely, he waved and went out the door.
*
Brandon took a generous swig, cleared his throat, then told Aje, "I had a talk with Angela."
Aje looked at him pityingly. "A lo-o-ng talk, I’ll bet."
"Long enough." How do I say this? It was one thing deciding to spill Nate’s guts, and another doing it. Maybe I should have told Aje over the phone.He would never have believed me.
"He’s been hit before," Brandon blurted.
Aje looked at him blankly.
Brandon frowned. "By lightning."
"Talk about your world’s records," Aje joked.
"Anyway, I was talking with his mom—" Jeez, this is hard, Brandon thought.
"You two’ve been getting pretty chummy since you played ‘rat droppings’ with Rita," Adrian commented. "People are beginning to talk."
Brandon looked at him dourly. "No people worth listening to."
"Go on. You were about to tell me how you’ve been nosing around in Nate’s business."
"There’re some things you should know."
"The biggest one being why one of his ‘friends’ is prying. Second one is why you’re narcing on him."
"I’m not telling anybody," Brand replied with some asperity.
"First, I’m not worth listening to. Then, I’m a nobody. You have no people skills."
"Shut up, Aje, and listen. Nate has real problems."
Aje sobered. "Not that I’ve noticed."
"Have you ever noticed he has no computer? Pretty weird for a scientist."
"Why should he? The labs must be full of ’em."
"No TV, no radio—that work, anyway. He’s the only person I know without a microwave."
Aje was silent, but his expression was grim, his eyes narrowed.
"It’s not because he’s poor," Brandon went on. "He has plenty of money floating around."
"Checked into that, too, did we?" Aje retorted sarcastically.
"What about his lights? And the way they’re always going out?"
"You said yourself it was a bad neighbourhood."
"But maybe not so bad for him…"
"How convoluted!" Aje’s voice was dripping sarcasm. "What the hell is that supposed to mean?"
"That Nate knows he’s got a problem."
"If you mean he’s scared of electricity or something, it may be a little weird, but it’s not sick."
"I’m not talking phobias, Aje. Nate’s problems are bigger than that."
"So, he’s been struck by lightning twice. Wrong place, wrong time. Big deal." Adrian’s face was flushed, his eyes angry. "Did you ever think your policeman’s brain is making you read this all wrong? Maybe Nate’s house’s in one of those weird places where gravity or the magnetic field throws everything off—"
Brand looked at him shrewdly. "All I mentioned were the lights."
Aje frowned. "Is this the way you cops work? Picking apart everything anyone says?" He added, "No wonder they used to call detective-types ‘dicks’."
Leave it to Aje. Brandon’s smile flickered. "His mother said—"
"Now there’s a reliable source!" Aje commented brightly. "So glad you questioned her." He lowered his voice. "Just to remind you—this is also the woman who named him Hubert."
"It’s serious, Aje!" Brand told him impatiently. "It’s not just the second time Nate’s been struck by lightning."
It was Aje’s turn to look impatient. "You said—"
"It’s the ninth."
*
"So, give me your best explanation, Doctor."
Damn the man. Adam Saracen had suspected nobody would let the incident rest. Wasn’t it enough for Hollebeck to know his agent was alive? Why did he have to pursue this into the ground?
Because he’s wondering whether there’s something about Leighton he or his department can use.
Or need to protect themselves against.
For the tenth time, Saracen wondered how fate could have tossed things this way. Why did Leighton have to "help" the one person on hospital grounds who could draw the most attention to something he desperately wanted to hide?
Adam was suddenly glad he wasn’t working upstairs. He’d have had a difficult time controlling his curiosity where Leighton was concerned, or his resentment toward Ransford. He couldn’t believe the woman’s ingratitude. How could she dismiss what Leighton had done so lightly?
If it were me, I wouldn’t tell anybody.
Just like he didn’t intend to tell Hollebeck now. Adam was incredibly curious about the source of Leighton’s energy, and he would have loved to discover whether it was internally generated, or more of a channelling exercise. But, there was no way he was going to follow up on it until Leighton was no longer the centre of attention.
The man had been in critical condition ever since he’d collapsed in the emergency room. He’d been so depleted that he’d gone into arrest, and they’d had to resuscitate him twice before they could move him. Once he was upstairs, they couldn’t monitor him properly, because he kept throwing off the machines.
Something about his chemistry was wrong, and his electrolyte balance was way off. When they’d tried to bring it into normal levels, he’d almost expired once more. He’d been in and out of coma for the past ten hours.
His family was really worried, but silent. There’d been an unending stream of visitors to the ICU, and not one had mentioned anything weird. Adam was just glad there’d been no repetition of the rat-mouse incident. Everyone on staff knew about it, and he wondered when Hollebeck was going to hear.
"Simple case of electrocution," Adam said. "That’s what’s going on the record."
Hollebeck looked at him shrewdly. "What record? Apparently, until he was blown off a mountain, Hubert Leighton had never been to a doctor."
"No medical history?" Adam couldn’t quite conceal his surprise. "No immunisations or ‘well-child’ checks?"
Hollebeck shook his head. "Not that we can find. Believe me, we’ve looked."
"What does his family say?"
"Just that he had all the ‘normal’ things done."
Adam considered it. Leighton’s records could be really important right now in determining treatment. If they were going to stabilise him, it would help if they didn’t have to rediscover the quirks in his physiology.
Hollebeck suspected the doctor was being deliberately evasive. What he couldn’t understand was why—unless Saracen thought what had happened in the ER would reflect badly on him. The family was another matter: "silence unto death" may well have been their motto. That’s what it was going to be, too, if Leighton didn’t get the appropriate treatment soon.
Does it matter?
Leighton had, in some bizarre way, saved Chaz Ransford’s life. Saracen might not be reporting it that way, but the two nurses and the security man were.
And I saw Chaz at the lake. In Hollebeck’s mind, she’d been dead without question, and he and the rest of the team had already begun to mourn her. Now, she was back, and there was no "medical" solution for it. Only a man with an overdose of electricity at his fingertips—and who’d had no business downstairs, in the Emergency Room.
Leighton lived on the fringe. He had a modern occupation, but few of the modern conveniences. Jim Casavas had been appalled at the lack of TV or stereo, toaster or microwave in his home. No modern conveniences, and half the lights out of commission. Jim had even suggested that Leighton must actually live somewhere else, and that this was some extension to his "lab".
The dung collection had really thrown him. Jim had called Hollebeck in personally to take a look. It seemed they were dealing with some weirdo with a particularly odd fetish.
Hollebeck had almost left it at that. Put it down to a series of bizarre circumstances that weren’t worth investigating. But Chaz had insisted that they do something to help the man out. In her mind, Leighton had given his life for hers—or nearly.
"I owe him," she’d said.
Which meant Hollebeck owed him, too—at least to the extent of rooting out his medical records. Something which would give his doctors a place to start.
Adam Saracen was still thinking things over.
Hollebeck waited patiently, but no suggestions were forthcoming. His lips quirked in what could have been a smile. "I was thinking about giving his mother our standard treatment for acquiring more information. You know—beating the soles of her feet with sticks, bamboo under the fingernails—not to mention ‘drug therapy’…"
Adam Saracen scowled at him.
Grudging co-operation. Hollebeck suppressed his amusement. "Anything to add, Doctor?"
"Some of Leighton’s friends were here for hours. I could ask one of them. See if he knows the name of Leighton’s doctor."
Vague, non-committal. It was about what he’d expected. "Any names you’d like to give me? So we could do the asking?"
"With sticks and bamboo?" Adam’s lips creased in a smile. "No thanks. Might ruin my reputation."
Duncan Hollebeck grinned. "You’ll let me know what you come up with?"
Adam told him honestly, "No." He leaned back in his chair. "It’s on a ‘need to know’ basis only, Hollebeck. I’ll tell the people who need to know."
*
Brandon felt like a fool playing all these surreptitious games. He wondered if avoiding the people who were investigating Nate was the same as obstructing justice. If so, he’d overstepped the bounds.
Still, the doctor, Adam Saracen, had seemed to agree with him. He’d been damned surreptitious, too. "If you know anything about his medical records, or the name of his doctor…" he’d begun.
And Brandon had found himself volunteering. "I’ll do my best to find out," he’d said. Now, sitting here talking to Nate’s mum (this is Angela Leighton—not some kind of Mata Hari), he felt as though he’d entered the Twilight Zone.
"It was easy," she admitted, shrugging. "I just took Hubert into the receptionist’s office, where they kept the computer. One of my cousins lifted the hard copy."
No problem. Brandon’s eyes had widened slightly. The ease with which she discussed it told him it wasn’t the only time the family had covered for little "Hubert". No wonder Nate had moved away.
"He shouldn’t have left home," she said now, upset. "But he was so set on being a scientist. I tried to tell him it wouldn’t work—that it would only get him into trouble."
"He was doing fine until the ‘accident’," Brand reminded her. "It must’ve been hard on him."
She nodded. "Not so hard now as it used to be, when he was a kid. As long as he stays on his meds he can get by." She looked worriedly at the clock. "He needs them, Brandon. They’ll never stabilise him without them."
"What ‘meds’?"
For the first time she wondered if she was making the wisest decision in telling him all this. She lowered her head, avoiding his eyes. "He thinks his liver doesn’t work right—that he needs medication."
"Angela, he must’ve figured out his electrical problems by now," Brand told her sarcastically. "He’s a smart guy."
"Which is probably why he lives in that hovel," she admitted. "But he thinks it’s limited to buzzy TVs and messed-up computers."
Brandon looked at her doubtfully. How could a guy get struck by lightning that many times—especially someone as smart as Nate—and not figure it out?
Angela told him earnestly, "He doesn’t know how bad it can get. And we never told him about all the lightning strikes." She looked slightly embarrassed. "He’d never remember much afterwards, so I let him think it was some kind of transient seizure, brought on by his liver trouble."
"Shit!" Brandon couldn’t totally conceal his shock. Here, I thought I knew these people so well…
"Exactly." Misinterpreting his reaction completely, she flashed him a smile. "I told him he should have stuck to a mechanical field—that some people just can’t use computers. We never had TV or radio, so he really didn’t know what he was missing. He got that scientist idea from reading."
"He still doesn’t have TV—"
"Of course not," she said, as though he were being deliberately obtuse. "He interferes with them. Not even the meds can totally stop that." Her eyes darkened. "He learned pretty early that he couldn’t go visiting, like other kids." She added, a little bitterly, "Most of them preferred their TVs to his presence. I tried to make him believe that was normal, too, but I don’t think it helped." She sighed. "We tried everything—did all the reading we could on bioelectric fields and feedback. Gave him all kinds of ‘medicine’, just to see if something would work."
Brandon paled.
Angela didn’t notice. "Finally, my cousin came up with a mixture that seemed to help. After that, Hubert could sometimes go to school. It didn’t help with the lightning, though. After the fifth time he got hit, I used to keep him home whenever there was a storm warning." She smirked. "Or whenever someone got suspicious."
"Did he get to play football, or anything like that?"
She shook her head. "I wouldn’t let him. You can see why, can’t you, Brand? Why I didn’t want him to have too much contact with other people? To be labelled a ‘freak’? School was pretty safe because they didn’t know he was ‘special’. If he’d start to feel sick, they’d call me, and I’d adjust his medication. His electrolyte balance is still really sensitive, which makes it stupid for him to live alone." Her jaw shook, and Brandon knew she was close to tears. "He thinks he’s ‘normal’—but he could die so easily." Wiping her eyes with the back of her hand, she added, "I hated it when Hubert started taking those long hikes into the mountains. Teenagers do that kind of thing, but I didn’t know he was still into it. There’s not only the lightning, but …"
Brandon was no longer listening. He was thinking how it must have been for Nate, growing up with this woman—and her family. Everything hidden, and all those "adjustments" to whatever medication they’d come up with.
It also did a lot to explain Nate’s solitude. He’d probably learned a long time ago not to "inflict" his company on other people. Suspected in some way he’d be hazardous to either their health, or their prized possessions.
But, it didn’t stop the people from coming to Nate. Maybe it was because he’d been alone for so long, that he’d been forced to develop more personality to compensate. He was well-read, interesting, and could talk about anything. What got people the most, though, was Nate’s smile.
Now that he knew Nate’s background, that smile made Brandon feel as though he’d been gut-punched. Nate always found something to smile about, or joke about—something to enthuse over in the ordinary.
Maybe because he’d never had any "ordinary"—and he was just so glad to be alive, and away from everyone "protecting" him.
Angela was still talking. "…If I can get him his meds, they might put yesterday’s incident down to some stray electrical charge." She looked at Brandon a little desperately. "They’re watching me, Brandon. Closely. If Hubert doesn’t get this stuff, he’ll die."
"What’s in it?"
"Sodium and some metallic salts to balance his electrolytes. Otherwise, the electricity will start to burn him up, from the inside out."
"Like a short circuit."
She fidgeted nervously. "More like a short starting a fire."
Something else occurred to Brandon. If Angela was telling the truth, there was a good chance Nate didn’t know what was in his "meds". After so many years, he might assume they were something he needed for maintenance, the way some people needed insulin or thyroid pills. "Does Nate know what the meds do?"
"He thinks they stop the seizures," she said dismally.
Brandon must have looked as appalled as he felt, because she reacted defensively.
"What would you do, if he were your son? Tell him the truth? What do you think that would do to him?"
"Don’t you think—after last night—he may’ve figured it out?" He tried to imagine how Nate was going to feel about all this, when he woke up.
If he wakes up.
"If he doesn’t get his meds, he’ll die," she insisted.
Nate grinning, and offering them a snack. Fixing it in an old gas oven, because he couldn’t use a microwave. Joking about Aje’s Playstation games, when he’d probably never even seen one.
No TV. No radio. Nothing but long nights with his books and his fungus—and the lights popping off all around him.
Yet the idiot still smiled. Thought he was lucky, to have gotten as far as he had.
Shit.
"I’ll do it," Brandon said.
*
Aje had been angry for hours. It didn’t help that he was tired. Tired always made him irritable. God knows he hadn’t slept much since Nate’s escapade in the mountains. He’d been too worried about the damn fool.
Not the only fool…
He thought about all the hours he and Brandon had spent with Nate. How the man had lied to them—taken them in. Was there anything about him that was real?
Yeah, he decided bitterly. His admiration for dung. No one could fake that much fanaticism for faeces.Or that degree of weirdness.
Brandon’s words: No TV. No stereo. No microwave.
I wanted to believe he was eccentric. That he’d chosen to live a little strangely—not that it was built into his character.
Or his lack of it. Despite his anger, Aje felt a grudging admiration for the way Nate had pulled it off. His "friend", Hubert Leighton, was apparently a master of deceit.
And so ballsy he’d even take on a policeman. He wondered if it had given Nate as much gratification to mislead Brand, as it did Aje to insult him.
The difference being—I don’t mean it. Obviously, Nate does.
The thing that ate at him most was Brandon’s warning, that Nate might be lethal, given the right—or wrong—circumstances. Circumstances being lightning storms, or any time he was set on "surge". Brandon hadn’t been able to tell him exactly when those times were—but, he’d had his information straight from Nate’s mom.
Unless she’s a pathological liar, too. Maybe it’s a family thing…
Nate had never said a thing to warn them. Never indicated that it might be a good time to bail, because his ions were getting a little overeager. Never cared whether he was being hazardous to his so-called friends’ health.
Now some government people were after him, and Aje had been warned by Brand to "watch his step". It just gets better and better. As Nate’s friend, he might inadvertently be involved.
Aje felt the wariness most people do when confronted by a government agency: he was caught somewhere between ridicule and respect. All he knew for certain was that he didn’t want them focusing on one Adrian Morton. He couldn’t help but recall all the times he’d fibbed on his tax forms, or run a red light. Knowing surveillance was a possibility, made it suddenly a probability, and expanded the time frame. How long had he known Nate? Years. What the hell had Leighton done to invite a government agency into all their lives?
Murder and mayhem…
Whatever it was, Aje didn’t want anything to do with it.
Aje picked up the book he’d bought for Nate—before his early-afternoon discussion with Brand. That was one thing about Nate: he always appreciated a good book. Next to his fungus, his mini-library was his most prized possession.
More lies. Aje angrily snapped the volume closed, then threw it furiously at the wall. The spine broke, and pages went sliding across the floor. Aje’s jaw tightened at the destruction. If he’d felt like a fool before, he really felt like one now.
I could’ve returned it, he thought. Too late.
Everyone knew that once things were broken, there was really no way to put them back the way they were before.
Aje stomped out, and closed the door with a decisive click.
*
"I need your help."
"Don’t you have a police force you can call on?" Aje replied.
He wasn’t much happier with Brandon right now than he was with Nate. There are times when ignorance is bliss. All that Brand’s warning about the Feds had done was make Aje see people tailing him at every intersection.
"This is serious."
"First my day, now my week. Get lost, Weisner—"
Brand was silent.
Aje stared down at his phone, wishing he could toss it and all the day’s revelations out the window.
My cellphone. Another thing that doesn’t work when Leighton’s around…
"What?" It sounded surly, even to him.
"Meet me—"
"Hate to have to remind you, but I’m heterosexual."
Brandon grinned. Aje was beginning to get his sense of humour back. "So am I. It’s no excuse."
"What d’you want, oh Grim and Morbid One?"
"To give a helping hand to a friend, Aje."
It was Aje’s turn to be silent. Brandon was about to hang up when Aje came back on the line. "Are you sure about this?" All traces of humour were gone from his voice.
Brandon sighed. "Yeah," he said. "I blew it. There’s a ‘situation’, but I understand it a whole lot better now."
Aje smiled for the first time in hours. "Nice to know you can extenuate the circumstances."
"Hey—let’s be positive. At least you won’t be feeling guilty alone."
"I wanta make sure I have this right. Are you actually admitting you made a mistake? A ‘boo-boo’?"
"First time ever."
"Don’t tell me: that’s why you didn’t recognise it. Such humility deserves a reward. I’m buying—"
"Just try to remember you said that when they bring you the tab."
*
"You’re out of your mind! How could he not know?"
"Nate thinks he gets seizures—that the medicine controls it."
"What does it really do?"
"Brings him into chemical balance—so he doesn’t burn himself up."
"Like one of those people who self-immolates?" Aje sounded horrified.
Brandon shook his head. "I don’t know. The way I heard it, he saved someone’s life in the ER. A woman who turned out to be a Fed."
"Talk about your boo-boos."
Brandon’s grin flickered. "He put on some kind of electrical show—arcs and lightning bolts. Warned everyone to stay back, then fried her and himself. Brought her back from the dead—"
At Aje’s shocked expression, Brandon nodded. "Yeah, they were about to call it. Anyway, what worked for her nearly burned him out. His heart stopped twice, right in the ER. They got him going, but that’s why he’s back in ICU." Brandon took a small vial out of his pocket. "These are his ‘meds’. His twisted family’s been giving him this stuff for years, just to control him. He doesn’t know any better, Aje. He takes it, just like a diabetic would insulin."
Aje looked shocked—and sick. Sick enough, in fact, that he excused himself and disappeared to the Men’s room. When he came back, a couple of shades paler, Brandon remarked. "Didn’t know you were so sympathetic. What would you have done if it’d been a syringe?"
Aje grunted.
Brandon shook the vial, watching the glints through the glass. "No telling exactly what’s in it, but it seems to keep him from ‘burn-out’. Angela thinks that’s what happened in the ER. His system went into overload." Brand added, "She also swears if he doesn’t get the stuff soon, he’ll die."
"What about the electrical problem? Don’t tell me he hasn’t figured it out."
"He must know about the interference. Hell, look at his lights. But ‘Mom’ insists that’s all he knows. She also says there’s no danger unless someone’s with him outside, during a thunderstorm." Brandon had to clear his throat before he went on. He lowered his voice. "Nate’s so scared of them that he hides in a closet, or under a desk, until it’s over."
Aje remembered a time he’d gone to visit Nate at work. Nate had claimed he was searching for a slide he’d dropped, under the desk. There’d been a weird look in his eyes, though, that he hadn’t quite been able to disguise. Now Aje knew it for what it was: terror.
"He thinks he’s been hit twice. The other times, the family put it down to ‘seizures’."
"If he didn’t know what he was capable of, he wouldn’t have warned them to stay back," Aje reminded him. "In the ER."
"Unless Nate felt it coming on." Brandon looked at his hands. "The security guard said he was screaming and writhing—like he was in some kind of agony—"
"Oh, shit—" Aje buried his face in his hands.
"Nate’s gonna die unless he gets this stuff. It may be no good in the long term, but it’s what he needs right now. For all we know, he’s a junkie on this shit, and withdrawal’s putting added strain on his system."
"You can’t just give it to him."
Brandon frowned. "It’s decided, Aje. Seems to me it’s worth the risk. I just need you for distraction."
"Method?"
"What?"
"How the hell’re you gonna give it to him? Intravenously?"
"Fuck."
"Yeah. We’re fucked. You can’t expect an unconscious man to drink it."
"I wonder if Nate’s family runs to medical types—"
"Only lunatics and morons. It’s time, Mr. Cop, to dig up someone else we can trust."

